If you’ve read my story, please share your thoughts in the comments! For more information, please read the Notes and Credits section.
WE’VE MADE IT! OVER TWO YEARS LATER AND THE FIRST HALF OF “THE FATE OF SOLEANNA” (The Dream’s Beginning) HAS FINALLY COME TO AN END! Goodness gracious I did not think it’d take this long to be honest with ya’ll, but we’ve made it! :D I’m looking forward to continuing on to the second half of the story, but before that, I would LOVE to hear from ya’ll! So PLEASE feel free to share any thoughts, opinions, and feelings you have on the story, whether positive or negative, I genuinely welcome all of it! Answer however you’d like! Some specific questions I have if ya’ll are willing to answer… (you don’t need to answer them all, I know there’s a lot, haha. Just giving ya’ll some questions to work off of for responses.) What would you rate the story out of 10? What was your favorite moment in the story? What was your least favorite moment? And I’d love to hear why! Who was your favorite character? Who was your least favorite character? Which character do you think was written the best? Which character do you think was written the worst? (You can be honest! I don’t mind one bit!) What was your favorite character design (out of the original characters in the story)? What was your least favorite character design? In what way do you think my writing could improve? Did anything in the story disappoint you? Did you enjoy the pacing of the story? Did it ever feel too fast or too slow at some point? And when? Would you consider some of the events in the story “too dark” or “too mature”? Should my story have been toned down? In comparison to this story… What would you like to see more of in the next story? What would you like to see less of in the next story? Which character do you want to see more of? Is there anything would you like to appear in the next story that exists in the Sonic the Hedgehog world? Is there anything you felt was missing from this story? What questions do you have that you want answered? What are your thoughts on the ending? Did you enjoy Venice the Hedgehog as a character? What are your thoughts on Kaylee/Nova Collie as a character so far? What are your thoughts on her character design? (We’ll be seeing more of her so I’d love to know how my audience feels about her, and if there’s anything I need to improve upon before she returns as a main protagonist alongside Silver.) And an important subject to address: What are your thoughts on how Silver the Hedgehog was written and portrayed in this story (apart from the scenes directly taken from Sonic the Hedgehog 2006)? Do you think I captured the character well, or poorly? What do you think I got right about Silver?What did I get wrong? What could I improve upon? Aaaaaannnndd…that’s all I can think of! Oh, and one final thing, your age does not matter here when it comes to responses. Do not think because you are young, or you don’t have experience in writing/storytelling, that you cannot answer my questions, or you think your opinion does not matter, or that it may be “wrong”, or isn’t worth giving. I value any and all opinions and critiques, no matter who you are, or what experience you have! Please share them! Thank you so much for your responses! I hope you all have a blessed day today, and look forward to what’s next in the story! I will be temporarily taking a break as stated previously, but I’ll still be checkin’ up on here and doing my best to keep ya’ll updated…and may have some fun lil’ surprises for you guys while ya’ll wait. Wink wink.