my favorite lines: Luce glares at Dee with years of hatred in her eyes some of in my mindscape: Prologue Setting: An old town built with large stone pieces overgrown with various types of plant Time: year 3498, may 25, 5:00 Lisley ran knowing that she was being hunted down “what shall I do!?!?” She said desperate to find a place to hide when a portal opened in a dark alley (better than nothing I guess) she thought as she jumped in not knowing what was going to happen to her in there “where did she go!!” A soldier screamed “find her no matter what!!!” The commander demanded “she went into another dimension!” A woman screeched Chapter 1 I came out of the portal into inky black void I have seen darker blacks then I looked up to see a glowing white sun but it didn’t give off any light but I could see my hands Like I was glowing I walked for what seemed like an eternity until I saw a pitch black figure that seemed to be a girl than a diamond appeared where its eye would be than it was gone “hey look Dee another girl is here” someone sinisterly said. I yelped turning around (what should I do!?!?) my mind screamed as a hand landed on my shoulder ! “Hello! My name is Dee, that is Luce, and the black girl you saw is Lucy!” (Weird) I thought Dee smiled while Luce rolled her eyes “my name is lisley” I replied I walked away and then I saw a landscape full of colors I ran to it then it vanished suddenly I fell down a hole with spikes on the bottom but right when the spikes went through me I teleported to the ground and the hole was nowhere to be seen “what is going on where am I how do I leave!?!?!?!?” I scream panicking “well good luck with that Lisley” Luce says sarcastically “well… you are in Lucy’s mindscape, and the way you can leave would be to follow me and Luce to the portal” Dee replies calmly “what!?!?!?” I panicked, what would I do!?!? I ran away and a knife stabbed me! “Oh did we mention the fake death experience that happens” Luce teases Dee rolls her eyes while she said “ here follow me” as she walks away while I run to catch up to her pace suddenly a weird creature that looked almost like an axolotl appeared. It seemed shocked and confused! It looked at us and disappeared!! Gone! Why did I not? Almost like reading my mind Luce said “she fell asleep and woke up you came through a portal so you will have to go to the great grand blue portal” “wait what!!!” I screamed it was horrible. I thought that it was just a dream! And then I teleported to the portal freedom! I ran to it then teleported back. I started to sob when Luce helped me up. Why did she do that?? I wondered “Luce seems rude and sinister but deep down she is a big softy” Dee explains, Luce glares at Dee with years of hatred in her eyes and continued to walk. After a few hours of walking I asked Luce and Dee if we could take a break, right after I asked Luce suddenly became a black liquid almost like honey and she took the form of a dragon!!!
