If you liked the previous one more and don't mind its flaws, you can decide to use that instead. I do admit this version feels less GCA!Sebek as it relies on the unclear amount of time to have passed between GCA and TTW. It also doesn't have the recap, but let's face it this scene won't hit as hard for people who didn't watch GCA anyways. I guess if you use this one you can note that there's a scene that won't make sense for those who haven't seen GCA?
Here it is. The scene is shorter to not take away from whatever episode it's in, and GCA!Sebek feels like he's changed more which I think makes sense because it's been so long, and is in my opinion more likeable by deciding, by himself, to change. This is just the "director's cut" version I made because, honestly, I found GCA!Sebek to be kinda annoying and the original gave a message like "it's on you to redeem people who willingly attempted murder because they're just misunderstood!" Hence, even GCA!Sebek calls Present Sebek out on his optimism and realises he needs to put in the work himself instead of just following orders to receive validation. It's a more unique character arc in my opinion and I thought it'd be fun to see them reversing their dynamic... but, it may hit less hard as a scene. So I'm leaving the decision on which one to use to the one who makes the episode.