I'm making a graphic novel?

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wait for seeing his designs wait ten seconds ok I'd like to hear all of your opinions. Stay Funny Guys :p :D FENNEC :CHAPTER ONE: **CHAPTER 1** Page 1 FENNEC CAPTION (EVEN BEFORE I WAS BORN EVIL HAS RULED THIS WORLD ): content Shows Dirty city. With a lot of bad stuff happening. And one big shiny building. And Fennec is in middle dirty and in rags taking up 10% of the of the panel. Page 2 Panel 1 Fennec walks toward an alley with his head down FENNEC CAPTION (IM ONE OF THE LUCKY ONES TO BE WEARING ANYTHING AT ALL): content Panel 2 Shows litlle fox kid without any clothes and covering himself with his tail in the alley. Panel 3 Fennec breaks a piece of bread. Panel 4 Kid opens his eyes. Panel 5 HE tosses the bread to him FENNEC (HERE MARK): Panel 6 MARK eats bread ravenously Panel 7 Fennec smiles Page 3 Panel 1 Fennec walks away from alley He runs toward a building. Panel 2 He runs toward a building. Panel 3 He hides under the shadowy part of the building. Panel 4 Fennec eats. SFX (NUM YUM NUM): content Page 4 Panel 1 Robot passes by in big downward shot while fennec is still in the alley SFX (WHIIIIIR): content Page 5 Panel 1 Robot passes. SFX (WHIIIR): content CAPTION FENNEC (YIKES!!): content Fennec hides bread Panel 2 CAPTION (IF THEY CATCH ME THEY WILL TAKE MY BREAD): content Robot looks from Fennecs pov Fennec is in shadows SFX (VZZT): content Panel 3 Robot looks from its point of view. It sees nothing in alley Panel 4 SFX (WHHHIRRR): content Robot goes away Fennec is still in the shadows Page 6 Panel 1 CAPTION (THEY WANT US STARVING SO WE CAN...DO IT.): content he eats bread ravenously Panel 2 He looks there is no bread left. CAPTION (THE BREAD FEELS LESS THAN IT WAS): content Panel 3 CAPTION (BUT...AT LEAST I HAVE BREAD): content Panel 4 CAPTION (MOST PEOPLE HAVE BEEN CAPTURED BY...EVIL): Fennec curls up under his tail Panel 5 CAPTION (SOMETIMES I FEEL LONELY LIKE I COULD GIVE MYSELF UP THE EVIL FORCES): content FENNEC Looks up. Panel 6 CAPTION (BUT I WON´T ): content HE HIDES UNDER HIS TAIL Page 7 Panel 1 close up of fennecs hand turning blue CAPTION (BECAUSE I HAVE AN ABILITY NOBODY HAD ...EVER): content Panel 2 He hides his hands CAPTION (THATS WHY I'VE NEVER BEEN CAPTURED): content Panel 3 Fennec covers himself up with his tail CAPTION FENNEC ( DO I REALLY HAVE RESPONSIBILITY TO SAVE THESE GUYS?): content Panel 4 Fennec is in same pose CAPTION FENNEC (ITS NOT LIKE I DONT CARE AT ALL.I GAVE MARK BREAD...) content Page 8 Panel 1 Big shot from high up shows fennec hunched up and sleeping FENNEC (ZZZZZZZZ): content