Uh click for narxt I'm terrible at words all of a sudden what is happening also the extra random brown outline on the tufties was a mistake I still don't know how that happened :') Anyways yea a couple little tiny advices And I'm aware this is badly made and clearly rushed but I'll make a nicer-looking one soon and edit it somewhere that's not scratch XD so sorry for ruining your art and also sorry if you'd have prefered the essay I'd have given you in the comments otherwise :')))
1. hi+original 2. yapping 3. more yaps 4. I know that smile looks weird but I realized the thing that messed it up too late but you get the point I think.. anyways fix the muzzle and it looks a bit longer and results more in-depth and true to your angle 5-7. more blabbing+edits 8. the crits always do this so here' 9. was I supposed to 10. once again - also the muzzle tilt could certainly be adjusted but I've not the brainpower for that 11. yap yap 12. tips and yakking 13. byebye earth
