for yours @hedgehogH20, i wouldn't say yours if bad, i think it's pretty cool, but i would reccomd some things to improve: . try adding the "scanlines" (the scanlines are actually the coloured bits rather than the black bits but oh well that's what we call em) . try making the phosphor stripes a little more frequent, and convert them to bitmap, otherwise the way you did the vector image for each one spaces things out a little weird