Hewwooooo! This looks amazing, I love Cinderpelt! You definitely got her vibe. The rendering project I made is more of for settings with dramatic lighting in scenes rather than backgroundless drawings. I can see you added some light to the back, looks great. The only place where the lighting could be improved would be where there is shading could be improved a little is where there should be shadow, under the neck, and for the right side legs that are behind the rest of the body, since you haven't added that noticeable of a shadow to distinguish it from the rest of the body. (click to next slide) The eyes look weird because you changed the proportions. (click) The further eye shouldn't be at a different level just because it's further away. The anatomy looks a bit funny, specifically the legs. (click) x2 Don't just slur the whole limb into an okay-ish shape, the joints need to be in the correct positions. If you ever have trouble, just look up a real reference picture. Make sure they are on the same level. (were you trying to do a front angle?) Also you might want to consider making the outline darker/more opaque because the neckline and mouth is hard to see. Aaaand that's it for me. Hope you found this helpful! See how you go with this! Have a great day!!
