AAAAHHHHHHHHH IT’S SO UGLY AND UNFINISHED UUUUUUUMMMMM I hate drawing on my phone if you all insist I will tell you what's wrong with it. first, the saturation is all over the place, why is the focus point more desaturated than the pumpkins? second, pretty sure this is obvious but this is unfinished the lines are sloppy and messy. I don't hate the concept, the sketch was okay but I rly hate how I executed it. third, the stars literally look like white water stains, I know I can do better just look at my AT with @Ieafheart which has a much better looking night sky, fourth, what in the world is that paw? those claws look like folded paper glued onto a piece of wood. fifth, contrast. do I need to say any more? why is the light on the paw so bright? I didn't check greyscale on this piece even once. all the light areas are the same brightness which makes it appear messy in a bad way with no rhythm whatsoever. sixth, the eyelashes are very poorly drawn. I don't need to elaborate on that they just look ugly, seventh (omg 67) why is the ear shadow so purple, it sticks out like a sore thumb. eighth, damn that coloring is h o r r e n d o u s why the hek is some parts of the dark stripe darker even though it's closer to the light source? why is the green patch not fully colored in? anyways, that's all. I'm allowed to say this btw because this is my own art and I'm allowed to criticize my own art. and since I already feel so bad about it there's no need to tell me how to make it better, I know how.
