First name: Frost Middle name: Contess Last name: Winter Fandom: non Gender: Female Age: 16 Powers: Non/ (RP ONLY) cant die Pets: kitty Boyfriend/Girlfriend/Crush: Kaos Backstory:When Frost was adout 5 she moved for reasons she dident know at the time. at the time the town was very small only holding adout 100 people. Her childhood was easy and fun. the family never moved again from the little town soon when she turned 16 she could finally do it she could join the warrior rp thing out in the forest behind her house. she could had joined at the age 13 but her parent whould not let her go into the woods at the age. soon she join one of the 3 groups she join the group call rainfall there were 2 other shadow fire and the elvern. soon life started to change a rough group came in and took out shadow fire they called there self blood-rain. this happened the night before she joined and know she has to fight for her group to defend it and not let it get killed even if there is a serect blood-rain holds... Personality: Shy Cute Easy Going Clumsy Easly Scared Annoying Talks alot Quiet And Short Tempered Likes: cupcakes, yarn, land, ice, cats, family, purple, art, reading, gaming, history, singing quietly to her self, pranking other people, rain-fall, her town, her compter, being alone, Dislikes: Large groups, School , Pink, Red, Rap, Disco, Her middle name, Dogs , Fall , Snakes , Emos and To mant tabs up Flaws: Easly get hurt and when people dont remember her or When she get hurt ----- NOTES! First, lets discuss emo bangs. The bio says that she doesn't like emo people, yet she has the very popular emo bangs right in front of her face. I like how you tried to keep it simple, but for fursonas, especially cats and dogs, some markings are necessary to distinguish it from the rest. Her colors are okay, but they are very bright and are kinda hard to look at. The biggest problem I have with her, though, is her backstory. Its really confusing, with the "Her joining the warrior rp thing in the forest behind her house". Do you know what an RP is? Or what a Warriors RP is? I assure you, if this actually was a Warriors RP There would be no "Elvern" or "Shadow-Fire" or "Blood-Rain". Overall, this OC is a little below average. Her design and personality is mediocre, but for me, her backstory is what spoils it all. Its confusing, and to be honest, a little "all over the place." I like how you kept her colors simple, but perhaps tone down on the bright neon blue. ------ RATING! 3 / 5 - Three out of Five! - Almost there! A little improvement is needed!
