Another short story of mine from late 2013. This is based on an adventure my friend and I had one day, with only a few deviations from reality. I changed our names for the story, though (I'm Brielle and my friend is Eleanor). It's unfinished, though I do have plans for its continuation. (Also, the title doesn't make sense, since I haven't gotten to the pumpkins and business cards part.) I apologize for any spelling/grammatical mistakes, I never went back to proofread it. Space for next page; there are 7 total. Critiques & comments are welcome, but please no stealing or rude comments. Also, in-depth critiques are best - it helps if you tell me what you did and didn't like about my story :) The song is Radioactive by Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix (Imagine Dragons Cover).
