A multi-section short story of mine, from early 2014. Again, I apologize for any spelling/grammatical mistakes, since this is the rough draft. I hardly ever revise my stories. Not recommended for fairly young Scratchers? It can be a bit... weird... at times. Critiques & comments are welcome, but please no stealing or rude comments. Also, in-depth critiques are best - it helps if you tell me what you did and didn't like about my story :) Wow, guys... 17 loves, 14 favs, and over 100 views within a few weeks of posting? That's awesome, thank you so much. <3 The song is Elephant Island by Port Blue. ~-Brielle-
