My remix of CrimsonMoon115's CC! Here is backstory: Cinderfur, Pine's kit, was born a kittypet. She came to FireClan and was not welcomed well. Everybody thought she was a traitor and spy, since she was very, very inquisitive about FireClan. She was avoided by everybody. Cats rarely even talked to her. Everybody showed mean attitude and scorn towards Cinderfur. All the hate and rage boiled inside her, and finally spilled over. She killed a cat and fled into the night. She returned as a wild cat, hungry for blood and killing. She attacked many cats and killed an apprentice. Her previous mentor chased her from the clan. She gathered many cats, rouges, loners, kittypets, exiled cats, etc., and launched a surprise attack on FireClan. The party killed the deputy. Though, her mentor had her cornered. Battle: (Cinderfur point of view) "We killed the deputy!!" Cinderfur smiled. Suddenly, her mentor jumped on her. She hissed and twisted, biting him on the side. "What did I ever do to hurt you?" "You were mean, annoyed, and scornful towards me! You avoided me so much!" She slashed Lightningfur, her mentor, on the muzzle. Lightningfur forced her into the entrance of a dark cave. Lightning struck on the ground, causing fire in front of Cinderfur. She screeched. Lightningfur showed no sorrow. He bounded away. The fire grew hotter and hotter. A grumble sounded in the cave. She whipped around to see a pair of red eyes watching her. She died from the fire. A black cat was waiting for her. "Come. This is the Dark Forest, where all evil cats go. We train for blood." Cinderfur followed the cat into shadows. She made a promise right there and then. She would haunt Lightningfur from the Dark Forest. Forever.
Thanks to CrimsonMoon115 for the original. I added the fire from one of my other projects :).
