NOTICE: I've updated the project with an improved(?) version. press space to see the older version. <3 because of how it was already done, I couldn't take everyone's suggestions, but I did my best to put in the ones I thought would be the most important. (there were a few others I wanted to do, but I couldn't do them without redoing the drawing.) I've been experimenting with my art style and have finally worked out something I'm more than happy with. <3 also, am I the only one who has trouble surviving in the First Snow islands?? -- aa i love it (it's probably one of my favorites?) but I have so much trouble keeping my poor creatures alive.
The first slide is my review on your style. The second slide is how I would have drawn it. The third is my atmospheric review. \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ I hope this was helpful! I tried my best but I haven't really done this before, I was trying to think back to what advice I would have wanted, and needed, when I was trying to improve and develop my style. :)
