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well this OC could use a lot of improvement, you can make an astounding OC if you just changed her a little. Here is My Review: Picture: I'm not sure if that picture is from the internet or not, but I always prefer you use art that is SPECIFICALLY of your OC and was made/taken only for the purpose of the OC, taking off a few points though. Just for future notice btw Flaws: Well I think a balanced character needs about 3 flaws and 3 good traits, and to be honest "cares too much about what other people think" is kinda like a half flaw, try replacing that with insecure and maybe adding two others, good examples might be ditsy or clumsy (but not in the way that makes her adorable). Just search up character flaws and there should be at least two you'd feel okay putting on your oc. Good Traits: You've got a rare occurence: not enough good traits. Perhaps make her a good artist or dancer, add two more good traits. Backstory: I need to see character development and an idea of who she really is, not just the once popular girl. If you can improve all those aspects then you will have a well balanced and wonderful OC! -Serenity
