press space! remix this form with EVERYTHING Filled out or I won't review your character! Reminder: If you are easily hurt if your character doesn't receive a very good score then please do not enter, I am creating this service so that you can learn to improve your character!
Okay here we go: Your major flaw here is detail. Flaws - Can't do math is not really a flaw, a good replacement would be not smart, and then you should add two more different flaws to make a realistically flawed character. Good Traits - Instead of good chef you should say: culinary skilled, then you could add two more good traits! Backstory - WE NEED DETAIL!! Who taught him? Why is he in the wild? What happened? Use these: Who What Where When Why How use them to describe and learn about your character! -Serenity
