Star's Backstory: Born princess of Skyworld, on the planet of Phantasia, Star had a good upbringing, but, at the age of 12, there was brutal attack from Starworld's enemy, Infernia. This war had been on for 2 years, and, during that time, Star had seen and experienced a lot of things. She now suffered greatly from anxiety and lack of confidence. The war got so bad one day, that Star and her parents had to run away. She had a brother, Liam, who was 8 years older than her, but he was needed on the battlefield, since he was a general. Star and her parents had to run away to the land of Magica, to meet with Star's aunt Agatha, who was a noble there. on the way, however, Stars father was kidnapped by the demons of Infernia, and her mother was severely injured. Star managed to make it to Magica with her mother, but she doesn't know whether her father, or her brother, are dead or alive.
Design - This is alright (i have a personal thing about it but reviews are general opinion and not about what personally gets me) Name - The name is a little bit redundant, and odd, but i guess okay Flaws - these are fine Good Traits - this is a little unbalanced so perhaps add a few flaws or subtract a few goods Backstory - This is detailed and good