A part of a story I recently wrote (March 2014). I have some of the rest of the story planned, but I'm not sure if I'll ever get around to writing it. I apologize for any spelling/grammatical mistakes. 3/19/14 - More writing added on, also added violence warning. 4/2/14 - Wow... this has gotten fairly depressing... 5/29/14 - Removed the previous additions, due to them being too violent for an all-ages site. If you'd like to read them, there's a link to the full version is below. Just remember, this story is intended for readers 12 and up. This is just a guideline, if you're okay with some violence/depression you can read it, but I just wanted to let you know. c: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzESPaAeWUjPSkFXSkt3XzBrQ2c/view?usp=sharing Critiques & comments are welcome, but please no stealing or rude comments. Also, in-depth critiques are best - it helps if you tell me what you did and didn't like about my story :) The song is Killer by The Ready Set. ~-Brielle-
