Man, I'm convinced that galaxy sketch really smooths things over. There's so much I didn't see there that I do now that I've downloaded it and stuck it on here. >:U But the monitor on this laptop has less-vibrant colors than the thing I drew this monstrosity on. So. Still not a very good excuse, but whatever. haha, the handlebars are too low. The water should be a bit more still, too. oy. just noticed that. mm, and jan should be taller. it makes the bike look a lot bigger than it should be. those old things were small. I also just noticed that I need to use more variation with my hair colors. So far, 90% of all the people I think up all have brown hair. Heck, Jan's original hair color was darker than I have it. xD I decided that I wanted it to be a bit lighter. (since I envisioned her wearing a lot of brown toned stuff and a lighter color would go with brown but would't blend in.) So she ain't towheaded, just a sort of cendre blond (no idea what it is here in america, I found the term they use in sweden, though. xD), but lighter.
