A new short story of mine (late March 2014). This piece... well, I'm really not sure where the idea for it came from. It was inspired, most definitely, by Adam Young, but the actual concept of the story just sort of... presented itself to me when I sat down to write the other day. This is really just a rough draft, with a few minimal revisions I made while writing it, but I'm considering it mostly complete. I really like how it turned out, I'm quite proud of this. :) It turned out a lot less depressing that the other things I've been writing lately, and it's most definitely appropriate for all ages. I apologize for a spelling/grammatical mistakes I may have overlooked. Critiques & comments are welcome, but please no stealing or rude comments. Also, in-depth critiques are best - it helps if you tell me what you did and didn't like about my story :) The song is Of Japan by Port Blue (a.k.a. Adam Young, who is my greatest inspiration c:). ~-Brielle-
