Hello everyone! I think you've noticed that a past comic is not becoming a comic anymore,And I had a character that I missed from it so I redesigned her,Also if you noticed I had a bit of an art style change,hope you like it,Just improving my comic style so they don't look like chibis. Anyway press space to see the ugliest thing )I've created (well not really but its still hella ugly).First,she has a boring pose and she has that leaning problem where if you don't flip he picture,it'll look weird (most of the time,unless you have trained your eyes to behave,I guess) alsot hose spots they kinda look,strange,especially with the black line around all of them.Huh I haven't even told you her name but I mean its on the title so you don't really need to know.Anyway old ladies backstory,I'll just quote it from the first thing of her,ahem. ' As a young kitten Haven was adventurous and liked to run out of tribes territory and explore.As she grew older she came to despise Tribes and their ways of living and mocked the chief.Haven learned she could be a free runner and roam anywhere she wanted so one night she stole herbs from the healer and ran away.She faced many trials and even questioned returning ,she decided to keep going.She now lives in the tunnels by the mountains.'-Cloud,May,2017. Okay I didn't mind this backstory,I mean at least she wasn't perfect or anything but it still wasn't the best ever,Firstly,why the heck did she mock the chief what was her reasoning?I have the answer,she didn't have any. Now its time for and over view of new haven,who I think and hopefully you do to,that shes better -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- New haven:I hope I fixed her design,I changed her from a cat to a dog for my pleasure,as I like them a lot more than cats (But I still love cats!).I prefer the newer pose (and just saying but the new one took about half an hour,the other about two hours..I mean just saying) I like those paws,But that tail is amazing.I chose that orange eye colour for her eyes because I've been doing a lot of blue/green eyes lately and a originally in my first redesign from a few days ago had blue eyes,but I changed them to a dark orange.I used a similar colour palette but I changed the splotch colours,because I wanted them to stand out with out needing the lining.Now its time for a backstory that is similar with better wording and detail!Haven was born to the chief and his mate,nutmeg,whom raised her as well as they could.She levitated towards her mother,her father not being in her life as much as he should of been.She noticed her mother began to avoid him so she done the same,thinking he done something horrible.Turns out her mother was starting to become close to another dog,she soon figured out she was trying to become mates with them.Out of anger and confusion she attacked him,to an almost death state.She kept quiet about the situation,saying he went missing over the course of a hunt.He soon returned battered and dying.When he was fully healed he exposed her.Due to this she was driven out of her pack,and left on the borders.She couldn't do anything to be forgiven so she took off to the mountains,finding her home their. I know its bad I came up with it their,but I hope its better than the first! Song:Stranger things theme extended,you know the best t.v show ever please watch it if you can