MADE IN 2.0. THERE MAY BE ERRORS Space and right arrow to go forward Back arrow to go back Press M to mute music and U to unmute Sry, no description sneak peak this time. Too much work xD READ OTHER CHAPTERS BEFORE READING THIS ONE OR YOU WILL BE *VERY* CONFUSED 1st chapter (very cringe. so wow): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/174714504/ 2nd chapter: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/196361170/ 3rd chapter: This one! 4th chapter: WIP MM Studio (see latest updates, announcements, and how close I am to finishing the next chapter. Also, if you have any theories, you can share them there...) https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/4421763/ Officially out on Wattpad!: https://www.wattpad.com/story/169104057-movie-magic
(If you don't know what's happening, Movie Magic is a book series I've been writing over the past couple months. I'm not a real author, and I'm still only a kid, so they'll still be some mistakes, but I'm trying my best. Make sure you don't read this before you read the second chapter. You don't really NEED to read the first chapter- mainly cause it was the first time I ever wrote and it's horrible- but it would help give more of a backstory of Jemma's life. You could also look in the comments and @holirocks did her own "refined" version. Basically she took my idea and wrote it out as a more experienced author. Anyways, back to the show! Or book. idk xD ) I know I said July but this is close enough. Sorry! I'll try to be quicker next time. Please don't hate me! xD Okay. Whew.. -x 1. The usual. Apologies for the not-so-good writing. I'm still in training, and I'm trying my best. I'll get better over time, I promise. But one thing you could do is leave a comment with (constructive) criticism so I could learn what is good and what is not. -x-x 2. Sorry if this is not realistic. I am home schooled, and I don't really know how public school works, and this chapter is set in the school. I DO know the basic concept (I'm not isolated guys), but there is a 99.999% chance that I got something off. So, apologies for that too. -x-x-x 3. YAY. ANOTHER JONAH SCENE. THAT WENT DOWN WELL =DD. But, being serious, please tell me if this is too intense. I know Scratch guidelines are pretty strict, and I don't want to get this taken down. If this disturbs you in ANY way, please comment so I could fix it. And the reason Jonah is so harsh is because it's a big part of character development. You'll see. -x-x-x-x 4. Okay. I'm thinking of trying something new. My friend suggested that I switch the POV from Jemma, to the other main character (who you don't really know much about yet ;) ), to the villain (you don't know them either yet. At least so much...). I think It's a great idea, so say what you think of it below in the comments. Most of the story will probably still be in Jemma's POV, but there will be some switch offs from time to time (if you'd like that =D) -x-x-x-x-x 5. Uhhh... I got obsessed with Hamilton... Idk if that's gonna affect how I write... Yeah -x-x-x-x-x-x 6. I also got obsessed with KOTLC. That's DEFINITELY going to affect how I write. (thisisjustrandombutteamFosterKeefeorSophitz?) -x-x-x-x-x-x-x 7. Sorry for the inconsistency of the size of the words (If you have photographic memory, or pay really close attention to detail, you might realize that the first stage is bigger than the last stage). It's because, the way I write, first I type everything out, then I edit. Usually I come up with better ways to say or describe things, and it takes up more space then the first draft, and it usually doesn't fit into the original space, so I have to shift it. so yeah. This probably doesn't make sense xD. If you have any tips on how to avoid it.. Uh.. leave a comment! =D -x- Wow thanks for reading all this. Next chapter should be out in ABOUT 8 months. Thanks again. Bai! ^w^ -x- Songs: Dear Theodosia music box The Story of Tonight music box Burn music box (^ See what I'm talking about?) IF YOU READ ALL THE WAY DOWN HERE COMMENT MOVIE MAGIC
