So, @ArtsyStrawberry asked for some art critique, and I decided to come through with that. Since art is easier to explain through the piece it's self, I made an art piece similar for her review. I decided to keep the hand and face-shape so it stays original and not totally redone, also because I'm horrible at hands. XD I thought that since the light would be coming down in various places, I added some extra gradients for the effect of light, and changed some tone. Credits: @ArtsyStrawberry for original. @MCgirl21 for re-done version.