Characters, lines, plot ideas, basically everything by @warriorcatsFinally Haha look at me making this awful attempt at being a voice actor And if my voice is a bit scratchy (pun intended) I have a cold right now that might be throwing my voice off? I don't think it is, but just in case Constructive critism is wanted, needed, and it would be absolutely great if there were any pointers you could give me at all
