Click for next backdrop. All written by me. All lines are 8 syllables long, "did lie" IS correct grammar (#GrammarPolice, trust me, I know my grammar), there's probably some enjabnment, meaning a sentence carries on from one line to the next without punctuation at the end of the first line and also caesura, where the line has punctuation in the middle of it. Unconscious She lay there on the cold concrete, The rain pouring on her frail feet; Unconscious, she did lie, so pale, I thought to sit down at her side, But I could not see through the hail, Thought either way she'd not survive. He strode up to the girl, so close Seemed he wasn't going to go, But he soon left, just like I did And from the window I watched her. Another person and I hid, For they would just leave in a blur: But this one stopped; stooped by her side, Woke her up, she opened her eyes: Called an ambulance, she was fine; Away from freezing cold and ice, She finally breathed, came to life. Sorry it wouldn't appear on the actual thing. It's annoying. Sorry it's kind of... Cheesy. Inspired by the Good Samaritan parable.
