for scratch writing camp https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/5893101/ re-write of an excerpt from harry potter and the chamber of secrets ch. 8 (the deathday pary) i'm @-TapiocaPearl- btw, this is my side acc i should earn 225 points for my team (real-fi), right? or are the paragraphs too short/i did it wrong/etc.? idrk k hope you like it and hope we win ;)