READ THE STORY EXCERPT BELOW!!!!!! this took me a long time to make, so please don't remix, although you guys should be proud of me, this is one of my best works of art. (plus it took me 5 hours to complete)
Okay, so this is my Oc Name: Nightfeather (Nightstar) Rank: Deputy (given her leader name right before death) Gender: Female Clan: ThunderClan Mate: Silverstorm Kits: Flamefeather, Dandelionkit, Birchkit, Sweetclaw Apprentice: Toadpaw Mentor: Blacktail Mother: Nightbrair Father: Cloverheart Sisters: Snowkit, Sweetpaw Brothers: Brownkit Quotes: "there cannot be darkness without light, just as there cannot be shadow without sun" - 'the final eclipse' page 45 "you mouse brained furball, you walked straight into a badger set, and might I remind you, there was a badger still in it!" - 'the final eclipse' page 177 Nightfeather's death: "say goodbye flea pelt" Shadowflight snarled lunging for Nightfeather's throat. Nightfeather had moved barely out of the way as Shadowflight's claws swiped the air beside her ear. "What a shame Shadowflight, you were finally becoming a trustworthy warrior" Nightfeather hissed as she lunged at Shadowflight. Shadowflight, who had been caught by surprise, was flung into the tree behind him where he lay eerily still. Nightfeather straitened up panting as Silverstorm padded up to stand beside her, glaring at the body of Shadowflight. "Is he dead?" Silverstorm mewed flicking his tail toward the body by the tree. Nightfeather nodded, her gaze shadowed with an emotion Silverstorm couldn't read. Nightfeather turned to leave the stone hollow when a silver tabby tom leapt out of the shadow's. The tabby let out a yowl of fury and defiance and lunged for Nightfeather's throat. Nightfeather was caught by the throat and flung to the floor with a thud, blood welling up at a gash in her throat. "No!" Silverstorm yowled as he slashed at the tabby's muzzle. Silverstorm landed a powerful strike on his opponents flank, and watched as he turned tail and fled, wailing out of the hollow. Silverstorm ran up to Nightfeather's limp body and gasped as he saw how much blood was coming out of the wound on her neck. "Nightfeather?" Silverstorm croaked, his breath catching in his throat. Nightfeather looked up at her mate and Silverstorm saw deep sadness in the light blue depth's. "I'm sorry my love, I cannot stay with you.." she rasped, "I go to hunt with StarClan now". Silverstorm stared eyes wide with shock "N...No! you can't go! Snowstar is dead, and your clan needs you, I need you!" Silverstorm meowed frantically. "It's not my destiny to lead this clan" she murmured "it's..its yours". "No! you can't die, im not ready!" he cried but he knew he would have to accept it, his mates breathing was growing shallower and shallower. "I Nightfeather," Nightfeather began but was cut off. "No, Nightstar" Silverstorm meowed softly pressing his muzzle to Nighstar's. Nightstar resumed quickly "I say these words before StarClan, that the spirits of our ancestors may hear and approve my choice." "Silverstorm, you will be the new deputy" Silverstorm just pressed against Nightstar's muzzle. Nightstar gave a few shuddering breaths and was still and Silverstorm wanted to wail aloud, but knew he could not, his clan was waiting.
