Thank you for the advice! I greatly appreciate it. This is an audition for the voice. I would prefer to audition for this because I am female and I felt I could do this well. Even if I dont get the role I enjoyed recording the vocals. I do acting as an after school activity so I am hoping that doing voice acting could help me get better at mastering voices. Also I would like it if I didn't get the part that you tell me so I'm not constantly waiting to see if I did. And I used a voice changing software to complete the effects. I did it like this because I had no idea what Chillystar was looking for. When I saw the gender was neither and looked at the lines the impression I gained was that this character was a higher being and as such deserved a voice to match.
If this voice reminds you of shadow of the colossus then that is because I based it of that. Also you need to press space and when you reach the list of the voices lines the audio will kick in.