Intro: Yellowfang wakes up in the middle of the night in the ShadowClan camp. She gets up slowly and goes to watch the moon (moon reflection is in her eyes) , lip sinking "Sometimes I feel like giving up" Part 1: Yellowfang lipsinking "It isn't in my blood", then turns sharply and her gaze rests on Raggedkit, asleep beside Lizardstripe, who kicks the kit away in her sleep. It is night time and Yellowfang is watching from outside the ShadowClan warrior's den. Part 2: Yellowfang is asleep and white light surrounds her, then she appears in a dream (make white light surround the edges of all scenes) and have Yellowfang curled around three kits in a hollow tree, lipsink "Keep telling me that it gets better." then turn her gaze to stare sadly at her newborn kits, Wishkit, Hopekit and Brokenkit, lipsinking, "Does it ever?" Part 3: Yellowfang watching Wishkit and Hopekit fade, lipsinking "Help me." (make the angle on the side, so you can see both the kits and Yellowfang lipsinking) then turning her gaze to Brokenkit, who opens his eyes in an evil, angry face, then closing them again. Yellowfang lipsinking "Someone help me." Part 4: Yellowfang is watching her former mate, Raggedpelt, pick up newborn Brokenkit as soon as Yellowfang walks in camp. He narrows his eyes at Yellowfang as she walks in, but his gaze melts to joy when he see's Brokenkit for the first time. He picks up Brokenkit and races into the nursery to drop Brokenkit at Lizardstripe's belly, who glares at him. Yellowfang watching from the outside, lipsinking "But I just can't" and closes her eyes. Part 5: Yellowfang opens her eyes to see Lizardstripe unsheathe her claws at Raggedkit, who pounced on her tail. Brokenkit runs out of the nursery as Lizardstripe raises her claws to the air. Yellowfang flattens her ears, but turns away. Part 6: Brokenkit is being bullied by the other kits, because of his 'unknown' mother. One of them sneers at him, the other laughs (do not add any voices or laughing!) Yellowfang is watching, and lipsinks "I hate this." Brokenkit closes his eyes, then opens them, his eyes filled with fire and eyebrow's narrowed. Part 7: Brokenpaw is earning his warrior name. He is underneath the rock, and Raggedstar is sitting proudly. A beam of light comes down and shines on Brokentail's legs, turning them red. Yellowfang's eyes open wide. "Sometimes I feel like giving up, no medicine is strong enough" she lipsinks Part 8: Brokentail and Raggedstar run out of camp together. Yellowfang watches them as they go hunt. Seeing WindClan on the border, Raggedstar and Brokentail chase them away, but then Brokentail turns on Raggedstar and rakes his claws toward Raggedstar's neck. The screen turns blank. 2 seconds later, Yellowfang is crouching by her former mate's body, and has tears dripping from her eyes. (I know this is not exactly Raggedstar's death; how it goes in the book, but I need Yellowfang added in it for this MAP) Part 9: Brokenstar is on ShadowClan's leaders rock, and is addressing the clan. He bares his teeth and glares at two tiny kits (as though making them apprentices; this scene can be creative) Yellowfang lipsinks "It isn't in my blood" Part 10: Brokenstar slashes his claws at the two tiny kits in the Training Hollow, and the screen goes to Yellowfang, watching from the trees, who lipsinks "I need somebody now"
