These are the grades for the Bobo Academy writing class unit 1 students. The following says why each student got the score they did: GauntnerBM: The essay followed all of the FCAs, though the Intro could've been better. Rocheea: The intro and concl were great, as well as the details. My only advice would be to add more to the first one, because it didn't have much information. SuperDoom: The intro and concl were not very well-written, details did not state reasons, essay was not persuasive, and was completely off-topic. If you are not happy with your grade, you may do extra credit to bring it up. REMEMBER: This was just to see what you can do. Now I know what you need more work on, and that will be taught to you at class. If you read this whole thing, please type "ERAD UOY FI" (if you dare spelled backwards)
THANKS TO: - The Bobo Academy - Bobo Academy writing students - @GauntnerBM - @LeahKerry
