This is an extremely old short story of mine from November 2013. I wrote it for a freewrite where I picked a single line from a song and "told the story of that line". It's rather short, and I didn't edit it, so it has some odd sentence structure, but I definitely like it. What do you think? Critiques & comments are welcome, but please no stealing or rude comments. Also, in-depth critiques are best - it helps if you tell me what you did and didn't like about my story :) The song is The Snow Ballet by Owl City.
