I have fixed your project. CHECK THE ORIGINAL MAP PART FIRST THEN SEE WHAT I FIXED! It was pretty good, but there was lots of animation principles you missed. You also forgot pupils. I edited the audio slightly to be cleaner as well.
@redbottleofpoison Make sure you check his original map part and give him a follow! If you like and fave this and you dont like and fave the original i will literally kidnap your whole family cUH.