PLEASE READ, IT'S NOT THAT MUCH!!! Ok, so maybe this time my drawing of @potatobear616 is decent. But why did I make her look so...? XD Someone critique this please, I want this to be the best it can be. I hope I can get in the top 20!!! Also, is there anything cool I could add in the background? It looks kind of plain. read my comments below Click to see the version without the hand details, I kind of messed up on those :/ Ignore everything else inside the project please, just take a look at this and see what I can fix. I want it to be as good as possible! Also, is there anything cool I can add to make this look more epic??!! :D Time taken... 4 or 5 hours? Also, listen to the whole loop, I added something interesting :P (Ok, can someone tell me which drum beat I should use instead? It sounds weird) I'm a nutball, don't judge me (well, judge my entry XD) Over 70 views???