This is actually not that bad! In the beginning, i was like" UGH THIS IS HORRIBLE!", but now, i'm like "oo, me likey!" The ending was a bit off, and you may need to click the flag a few times before watchin g the final product, but all in all it's good! And i'm proud! :)
Well you deserve one, so lemme give you a description: Willowwish opens her eyes, and jumps out of the way she prepared to escape(i didn't show the part of her looking for the place, tho),went to apologize to Shatteredmoon,who is an emotional mess,THEN tells her he likes her! Then she breifly opens her ,eyes,finds out she forgot about Rain, calls to him to get out,and then finds out he's a ghost/spirit/wolf.