Thank you so much for the critique SC! The feedback was super helpful! Hopefully I addressed everything! In shot 32, the reason why I had camera movement was because I thought it would be a bit of like a focus change from the setting sun (a demonstration of Emma's introspection as the though is coming to her of whether or not to leave Lilly) to focus on Emma... but it might be entirely useless movement :P Lmk if there's anything that I need to add/change/modify