Hiya! This is my first short story! Please constructive criticism would be really helpful. Also a heart and star would help me out greatly! Press space for the next page. Everything by me except the thumbnail, which I pieced together with different art off the Internet. A few weeks ago we had an English test to create a short story. This was my story, but I rewrote it. What you are reading now is just the same plot. Welp! 100% in my test! There is a bit of violence, and it had an apocalyptic feel to it. But if you're ok with that type of thing, go ahead. NO advertising UNLESS it's about a writing competition OR you have followed me
