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The black she-cat is Raven/Ravenfeather. She grew up in the clans. She's actually half clan but no one ever finds out except herself and her kits, and of course her parents. Her kits' father was Falcon, but he was a loner. Graystar was Ravenfeather's leader and when he found out the kits, Sparrowpaw and Owlpaw, were halfclan he ordered them to be killed. Falcon had already been killed by one of the clan patrols. Sparrowpaw dies and Owlpaw flees, followed by Ravenfeather. Ravenfeather becomes a loner and changes her name to Raven, abandoning the clans. She returns a moon later to find Owlpaw. All the other leaders find out at a gathering that Graystar did this. He is exiled, to the delight of Raven who is watching nearby. She teases him and gets him to chase her into a barn, where a group of evil cats are living. When she comes in, she hides quickly , but Graystar comes in spitting with rage. The cats find him and kill him. Soooo yeah. IM SO DEPRESSIng MY GOSH