Space key! This is a Rin x Gumi fanfiction that is almost complete. I wrote it myself, here's an excerpt when they finally admit their feelings for each other. This IS a girl x girl story. If you don't like that kind of stuff, don't read it. All negative comments will be deleted. And don't think about reporting this, there is absolutely NOTHING wrong with two girls being in love. :) DON'T REMIX THIS!! Don't use without permission, blah blah blah. Here's the plot:Rin and Gumi meet at the hospital, after Rin falls into a coma for a week. They instantly become friends. Gumi loves Rin, and is pretty open about it, but her feelings aren't returned. The day after that, they meet up and head over to Gumi's house. Gumi is made aware that Rin doesn't like her back, but still wants to be friends. Soon, Gumi's caretaker, Maria (I made her up XD) leaves the house, leaving them alone. Rin thinks Gumi was secretly planning this, and she gets angry about it. When she blows up, Gumi kisses her, and Rin storms out of the house. Rin soon calms down and realizes that she was being too harsh and she overreacted, and then it hits her- she likes Gumi. Feeling weird, liking a girl, she suddenly becomes emotionally fragile. She musters up the courage to go back to Gumi's house soon, and apologizes. Everything seems to be going right until Gumi introduces her boyfriend Kaito to her, (continued in notes section)
plot continued: and Rin quickly leaves after a short, awkward conversation. Thrown into a spiral of confusion and depression, Rin gets sick, and is confined to bed for about three weeks. Gumi goes on a date with Kaito, seeming very in love, even kissing him, but when Gumi visits Rin after that, we find out that Gumi is using him to get her mind off of Rin, and possibly make her jealous. To get her mind off of Gumi, Rin signs up for summer camp, the one she and her friends go to every year. The bus ride will never be spoken of again, due to the weirdness. Soon all her friends are put in cabins with each other, she is stuck in a cabin full of weirdos she doesn't know. There's Momo the annoying OCD girl, Ruko the him/her ("Well, I'm mostly male.") who seems like he/she is using pheromones to manipulate people, Mayu the yandere who strangles her stuffed rabbit, Mew the creepy goth (who actually seems okay-ish), and Ritsu the quiet, mysterious one. That night, Rin is invited to play Truth or Dare with her crew and she accepts. Ritsu is the only one she knows without friends, and feeling pity for her, Rin invites her to come with. Ia has to kiss Yuma (and they both like each other anyway), Lily has to scream...um...an inappropriate word...really loud so the whole camp can hear her, Gakupo asked Miki if she was straight (earning a slap in the face in return), and more. Ritsu is also unearthed as a crossdressing guy. Gakupo is asked who he likes. He casually avoids it, and later leaves. Rin sees through his "happy act" and follows him, where he admits that he has a huge crush on Kaito. Being his best friend, Rin calms him down and brings him back to her cabin where they talk, and Rin spills to him about Gumi. Later, Team R and M (Rin, Ritsu, Ruko, Mayu, Mew, Momo) finds out that Ruko, under his/her flamboyant, cool personality, is actually really sensitive and emotional. "Hey, there's no such thing as straight for an it!" After that, Rin explains how she supports love between the same gender, and everyone gangs up on her, putting down gay and lesbian love. When night comes, Rin and Ritsu go to fill up their water bottles, and Ritsu tells Rin that he actually supports LGBT, and then tells her that he loves her. (Rin doesn't know it, but they both actually go to the same school.) Rin gently rejects him, spilling to him about the whole Gumi and Kaito story, giving more detail to him than Gakupo. Ritsu thinks about it in bed, how to get Rin and Gumi to be together. All he could ever want is Rin to smile every day, and he knows Gumi is the only way. He brainstorms ways to break up Gumi and Kaito. A while after camp is over, Kaito gets a phone call from his doctor's office. It says he has a rare disease and they need to freeze him until they find a cure. (We don't know it at the time, but Ritsu broke in and switched around the blood samples. The guy with the rare disease<Rin. That's his logic. XD) Kaito has to break up with Gumi and explains to her what happened. Gumi, feeling guilty and regretful, goes back home, and rants to Maria about her loving Rin and using Kaito. Maria, being homophobic, tells Gumi to get out. Gumi angrily drives around, soon arriving at Rin's house. That's where the excerpt comes in. After that, they kiss again, blah blah blah, and go back to Rin's house, where they promise not to tell homophobic Len (or the homophobic world). They enjoy a romantic relationship. Gakupo escorts Kaito to the hospital the next day to be frozen (for they are best friends), where Kaito admits that he likes Gakupo to his face, and asks for one kiss. "Nothing weird, but, please, just as I'm about to die, do this for me." Gakupo does that for him, and before he can say anything else, is forced to leave the room, because the doctors arrived. Gakupo gets really depressed yet really euphoric, and ends up in the mental hospital for a week himself. One day, Gumi is rushed to the hospital (wow, a lot of hospitals!) and reveals to Rin that she has a rare heart disease (the reason she was there at the beginning of the story) and she dies. Rin kills herself. At the funeral, her suicide note is read telling the story of their love, and everyone learns to accept all forms of love. Tragic love story, good ending. Like Romeo and Juliet, in a way. I read it for a class last year. SO GOOD. SHAKESPEARE IS LYYYFE. Then, in a sequel, called "Melancholic World", all the supporting cast writes letters to Rin and Gumi (even though they're both dead) explaining how they are go through life. So it's pretty much a collection of letters.
