start i guess: As the storm slashed the sky.A hooded figure aproached the house. Lightning sliced the stars. Thunder boomed, seconds after the bright bursts of light. A cold knock rang out through the house. An old lady came to the door, glaring at the one who disturbed her peace. "What do you want". She said in voice ragged with age. "A deal" the figure said their voice dripping with coldness. Briar woke up after a large crack of thunder shivering with delight. That spring there was a long drought, not raining for many months. School would of been canceled but summer was here.Summer should of been filled with happy days of splashing in the shores of Cresent Tide Island.Briar lived there, she thought it the best place, Ever! Briar was to turn 13 in july.She was short for her age with dark hair flowing down her back like a river.With a boom of thunder Briar decided it was time for breakfast. The sky was so thick with clouds you couldn't tell what time it was by the sun.Briar only could tell because she just woke up.She walked down the steps from upstairs it wasn't really up- stairs, it was more an attic with 1 small bedroom for Briar.Nearly every step creaked, worn by feet stepping on it for many years."Granny Apple" Briar called out to the kitchen. "Yes Sugar" Granny Apple replied although slightly muffled Briars mother had passed many years before due to Diabetes.Her father ran away shortly after her mother death.Running away with her faithful dog Lemon-Lime.Briar used to live in Atlanta GA but she had to move in with her Grandma just of the coast of Florida. Briar noticed Granny Apples(grandma) head was under the table and was poking something. "This dang cat won't get Out!" Granny Apple said saying the last word forcefully as an attempt to get the tabby out. "Don't hurt Charlie" Briar cried. "You named him,besides he swipes me when I sit down" Granny Apple replied crossly. Drip,Drip,drip there was lull in the rain. Briar opened her battered umbrella,sending Granny Apple one last glare thinking Granny Lemon before leaving.They weren't broke but poor,they just didn't have money for any extra.She walked down the street her tennis shoes splashing in the puddles. The splish splish of her shoes calming her. Suddenly black invaded her vision, she was with her mother?The sky was a pale blue with clouds,but weren't they in a hurricane? "Then the warrior said to Yezxi" her mother said. "I'm bored" Briar wait she watching from where?that was herself 6 years ago. Briar opened her eyes,she was in a hospital. "Honey do you remember what happened" a nurse asked.A man came up, "she's with me" he said in a cold voice. Confusion sparked in Briars head,who was this man and what did he want with her?When they got to his house a ugly shabby house something you would see in a horror film he started talking. "I will pay the medical bills if tonight you let me talk to you about something".What choice do I have,Briar thought. "Fine" she said.That night he had a knife on a table."I am your father" the man said.Shock pulsed through her body "Wha- Briar said cut off. "I NEVER wanted you,I was GOING to go ON tour WITH my BAND but No.I had TO stay there with my daughter THAT No one Wants" he snarled. "Why do YOU think SHE died I BET she RAN away from YOU" he yelled.No one wants me,I'm useless what good did I do.I'm slowly killing my grandma by eating what she could because I-I did.Was Briars last thought.She picked it up and stabbed it in her heart as the world went black.She had lost all hope don't steal my writing because that's not cool. for all!
Warning this is kinda dark...