The original drawing was really good! but there is always things to help you improve, so here are some of my tips! ___________________________________________ 1. Make sure there are no spots you haven't shaded in- this helps for a cleaner finish. 2. Use a light shade of grey to add shade to the white bit of the eye- extra detail and adds to the realism part of it. 3. When you add a pupil to the eye, it adds more life to the drawing (if you know what I mean). 4. Eyelashes should go in different directions and also remember to but eyelashes on the bottom of the eye. 5. I dont know what the pink of the eye in the corner is called, but it adds to the overall effect of the drawing. 6. Make sure the highlight is noticeable, it adds a sort of shine I guess. 7. Make sure the black bit (where all the eyelashes come out of) have no white bits coming out of it- cleaner finish. 8. Make sure there are not stray lines of pen emerging from certain areas of the eye for a cleaner finish. 9. Make sure the eyelashes are connected to the eye. 10. Have fun and dont give up if you dont think your drawing isn't how you wanted it to turn out, just keep trying and very soon you will make your drawing perfect! Thanks for reading this whole thing!
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