Oh dear :')
for the critiques, I would like you to look at the art, and compare the two and see what's up. It's that shadow weaver looks like a child ITO. I don't know if I used her color palette ITO, but I probably did, I've always been more of a swatch person when it comes to fanart. The lines on the bottom portion of the mask look like shading, so that's what I went with in the new version. The problem with shadow weaver is that I don't think they draw eyebrows on her. So I didn't feel like I could do that. So the emotion wasn't conveyed as well. This piece had pretty much nothing special. It went by pretty quickly in the new version. I'm just not passionate about it.