space or click Okay so ITO I worked super hard and was super proud. It sort of was supposed to show how they were connected as Frisk and Chara. I decided to give that same love to this art. I'm super proud again! It turned out really nice
I was gonna say "I'll be easy on myself" but no. I won't. To ignore critiques because you were once proud, even though your past self is never going to see what you're saying is not very fair imo. So none of my past works are safe. color palette-wise, there's not much to say. I've already said everything I want to. I like the color palette of the flowers *alone*, not with Chara's color palette. Judging by the direction of Chara's upper arm and forearm, her forearm has to be super long in comparison. I know this when I was drawing the original, but the tears are just too big. Chara's armpit is too high and looks weird The middle of Frisk's mini poncho is too low. WAIT CHARA'S COLLAR BONE. WHAT IS THAT? IT'S CURVING. IT'S AT AN ANGLE. The pose is pretty stiff for 8-10 year olds that are *very* freaked out. I made them freaked out and didn't give them a reason to be. I don't (and didn't) know where they were supposed to be. That's the end of my critiques. I just- I'm sorry. Very proud of me.