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SUGGESTIONS! please? I NEED ALLLLLLLL OF YOUR FEEDBACK! BTW this whole story was originally an assignment in my language arts class. It was a short story using 10 particular vocab words. That's why there's only 2 parts and this is how far I pretty much can go. Cuz I'm sometimes very bad with coming up with new ideas. So it is very vital for you guys to help me out!
