Redraw I did a few days ago because I could/needed a filler project. [ 300+ OTA and Peaceful teaser-trailer coming soon! ]. I'm honestly so proud of how the final product came out. What do you think and should I do more redraws as filler projects because they're easy? ----- Original- 11/08/2020 Okay. Let me set this straight. Eww. Ugly. Gross. Terrible. I. Hate. It. First of all, it just looks bad; second, the lineart sucks; third, the eyes are sooo bad; fourth, the general anatomy is terrible. I could keep listing things easily! Redraw- 11/10/2021 I really like how this turned out! I changed it so you could see more of the character, and added shading + little bits of shine to the piece. By colouring the lineart, the eyes and ears don't look weird as so that's good. I just like this so much better than the old one! ---- About the character for you weird people that want to know. Name: Goldenheart Universe: Warriors [ My young childish brain decided everything about her. ] Age in image: Young apprentice Close family: Moonclaw [ Sister], Greystorm [ Brother ], Starflight [ Father ], I can't remember her Mum's name Backstory: So basically Golden is an innocent child, and she grows up close with Moon. The pair are closer together and leave Grey out a lot [ Accidently of course ]. They go through apprentice training and become closer, telling each other their secrets. Once they hit warriorhood they're given their warrior names- Goldenheart because she is really kind and caring, Moonclaw because she was good at fighting [? I don't know? ], and Greystorm [ So unimportant I don't think I came up with a reason for his name. ]. There's a battle between Golden's Clan [ ThunderClan ] and ShadowClan [ I think ], during which ShadowClan's [ ? ] leader, Burnstar, k1lls Moon. Golden swears revenge and gets it, managing to wipe out almost all of ShadowClan while she's at it. There. My great Warriors OC story.
Art by @Cinnamiffin Design by @Cinnamiffin Story by Song is How To Save A Life by The Fray