8/10! Firstly , I appreciate the different colors for line art . It is a good step to make . Secondly , the proportions are also fun and stylistic . Here are two notes I would like you to take : angle . I think you would benefit from making a new vector for shoe on the right , facing slightly towards the camera . The pencil also should appear to hang off back and point towards camera as to not look like it is hanging off the left arm . Secondly : I would tone down darkness of pants line art just slightly . Overall it is very good , and I look forward to seeing how your style develops . very solid 8/10 .
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