6.5 is above average , as it is very unique , but there are some very important things I think you must consider . when you make a character lose all color and appear as a shadow , it is good to try and make them look recognizable . I think some more details , like little legs poking out , or a hand creeping from the side of the robe would make the design ' s shadow more unique . Secondly , I appreciate greatly the experimental line art , but it is important to give it purpose . examine where and why lines should be thinner or thicker , look at other artists who do similar things and try to study it . Thirdly, if you do experimental line art, make sure to stick with it . the shading lines should mirror the dynamic thickness/thinness of the outer lines . 6.5/10 is not bad at all , but there is potential for much greater . overall though , good job ! very eerie character .
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