14/15. Nice Job!!! 1. Good name and reason. Don't think the "song" part fits her too well. 1/2 a point. 2. Appearance is good, nothing too important. 1 point 3. (Skipping Current Age) Half-clan puts it on the border. The love story between her parents is pretty typical though, so: 1 point 4. Typical ranks, loner is a bit much, but nothing too much, she was forced out of her clan. 1 point 5. Pretty good and well-balanced likes. 1 point 6. Good dislikes! 1 point 7. I like how you balanced these out, with Creative, Smart and Fierce being on the better side and Short-tempered, insecure, and mischievous on "not-so-great". 1 point 8. (MOTHER ALONE) Good story, not too much drama. 1 point 9. (FATHER ALONE) Good quirks but an overall good father. 1 point 10. (SNOWKIT ALONE) not much to say here, but it makes sense Bristlepaw is wondering what it would be like to have a sister. 1 point 11. Nice and steady reasoning. Very realistic scenario. May want to say why she stopped loving Beepaw. 1 point I'm removing kits and apprentices because they don't exist. 12. Good reasoning! I like how you didn't make them BEST FRIENDS. 1 point 13. Ok, good. Nice reasoning! You might want to add some details or other friends. 1/2 point 14. Drama!!! I still think this is realistic and a good character. 1 point 15. RATING ALL SKILLS OVERALL good and balanced. 10/10
I didn't have enough room to do it in the project, so I did it in the "Instructions" panel up top :) 1 point is good, 1/2 is ok, none is bad in my opinion
