Hey everyone! So, this is a song I wrote last night... <---- notice, the last night meaning I wrote it in about 10 minutes... Anyway! I decided to record it and see what people thought of it! If you have any contstructive critisism, comment to me! Also, this song IS a work-on-progress!!! Especially the second verse... At first I was only going to sing the last part, but it was, like, 8 seconds long, so I added some more words (which ever ones my hand decided to write down) and... well, you can hear for yourself how it worked out... If you have any ideas on lyrics for the second verse (of first verse, or chorus...) please please please tell me!! I am an amateur songwriter, and I don't have very much experience (as in, this is the second song I've written) so I would LOVE feedback! Like now! Anyway, thanks for reading through my boring backstory of this song, and at least TRY to enjoy it! :P
Um... I wrote and sang this song... BTW, this song is talking about God, just in case the lyrics are kind of confusing... Lyrics: I'm bursting through the seams with love No one can hold me down I see you by me every day I see you in the clouds Of all creation big and small You made me like you And in your name I speak your grace And sing Let your love radiate Through my bones On my skin Let your love glow and glimmer Let it sweep me away Let your power echo through me Let your hand hold my heart Help me speak your love And radiate Please, my Father in Heaven Give me peace to endure Fill my lungs with your praise Make it sweep me away King of Kings and Lord of Lords Make me more like you Give me grace and peace and love To say Let your love radiate Through my bones On my skin Let your love glow and glimmer Let it sweep me away Let your power echo through me Let your hand hold my heart Help me speak your love And radiate (repeat) I just noticed the weird thing my voice did at the end... Sorry, my throat died and it made me change keys ;P
