1) i made the edges of the vest come off the shoulders so there would be more depth and a more clarified silhouette! 2) i made all the shadows only go one way (so light was coming from our left side) 3) just made the hair more flowy right there since it kind of pinched in 4) adjusted the neck so it was more parallel all of these are small tweaks, there wasn’t really much to adjust! i think the original was really cool and i love your tubbo design! sorry if this wasn’t as in-depth as you would’ve liked, thanks for coming to me about this though! i appreciate it! :’)