hi @crumblinq-! thank you for allowing me to critique your work! your style is so cute and i love the pose and design :D 1) i added some shading to the hood and made it wrap around the collar of the jacket to give it more depth! i also added more shading to the back of the hair, for depth also 2) i made the shoulder higher (further explanation later on) 3) i made the jacket stick out from the character more to give it more depth and give the character a slightly stronger silhouette, making the drawing a little more readable! 4) i made the waist slightly less skinny to make it more anatomically realistic 5) i added folds on the shoes to show that the toes are facing forward and bending! it’s very difficult for both feet to face directly towards each other so i tried to make it more realistic by doing this 6) i curved the band-aid to imply some kind of nose and add general depth to the face, but this is pretty optional! if you wanted the face to be flat then ignore this! if you click/space this was me looking at the line of action! i pushed the hood and ears to the side to give a sense of movement and i tilted the shoulders and hips in opposite directions to make it more dynamic :) also outlined the line of action to demonstrate what it is and also just help myself to learn from that lol! i really like the design and the pose like i said! the pose is so dynamic already and i think the color choices feel very futuristic! also the proportions are really accurate and the anatomy looks really good! i hope this was somewhat helpful! thanks for letting me critique this!
