Example Bios - Eclipse’s Orphans RP WRONG EDITION: (corrections will be in parentheses) Robyn (there is no last name!) || 10 (the age is too little!) || Female || She/Her || Pansexual || Assassin (that role isn’t open yet, nor is it possible for her age!) || 5 years (it doesn’t state she’s an orphan in roles) || British (That isn’t a nationality in the RP!) || Blonde hair, blue eyes, white skin, slender. (Way too “perfect” [no racism here, just giving the example “standard” of today’s beauty] and has no details!) || White shirt, blue pants. (No detail, not complete, doesn’t have three outfits) || (doesn’t have a link!) || Sweet, kind, funny (too perfect, too nice, no detail or imperfections) || Honey, sugar, cute stuff (no detail, not enough) || Mean people (not complete, no detail, no pet peeves) || Drawing, singing (incomplete, no detail) || no siblings, all of them died. (What? You could’ve just said Robyn was a single child. Too dramatic. You can always mention one or two, they don’t have to be real OCs) || The both died. (At least say you were an orphan in the roles!) || She’s lonely and doesn’t have friends because everyone bullies her. (Again, too dramatic) || A boy named Carter (its fine, but “Carter” isn’t an OC nor did the owner of the OC ask the owner of Carter) || None (fine) || An evil villain who she fights against (Whoa, thats not in the RP, so you can’t do that) || A dog. (No details, nothing. No links, no bio) || A huge sword which can destroy anything (Way to OP) || Bad dad who used to beat her up until her mom took her away where a fire happened and killed her mom and siblings. The evil villain caused the fire. The evil villain prisoner her then she escaped and vowed to fight crime. (Way to sad, dramatic, and just boring.) || Hershey’s (wrong code!) Pet Bio: WRONG EDITION Goldie || Dragon (Uh, that’s not open here, even if it exists) || Sandwing (That’s from WOF! Not in here!) || Beautiful, golden (no detail.) || (no links!) || Cheerful, funny (no detail) || bow tie (NO DETAIL) || n/a (its fine) || Swedish Fish (not right code silly!) The right version! (There is no code nor link, but you must add those in your bios) Robyn Jacobs || 14 || Female || She/her || Pansexual || Orphan || around 4 years || Cyberian || Pale skin, light brown freckles dusted over cheeks, dirty blonde hair which is usually unbrushed or in a messy braid, almond-shaped gray-blue eyes, short lashes, a few scratches on her ankles since she never wears socks, (fifth code is the color of Robyn’s weapon) she’s pretty fit but a bit skinny, a beauty spot on her chin, dark thin lips|| a white and black maid dress and maid’s apron with black shoes and a bonnet. Opt 2: A gray sweater with a white dress that goes till her knees. Gray pants and white heels. Opt 3: Leafy jacket over a silver shirt, black worn out sneakers, golden leggings, gold bow hair clip || (not in this example, but you have to do it) || Reckless and impatient, though sweet and playful. She can be over confident and egoistic, but does apologize when scolded by an elder. She is very determined, but that usually comes out as stubbornness. Robyn is also loud, a snitch, competitive, and a bit rude || Dogs, gold, play, competitions || Socks, chores, homework || Pretend-play, gymnastics || only child || Brian Jacobs, Ruby Jacobs (deceased) || She has a friend named Lia and a BFF named Bella || She doesn’t care about those things || n/a || Though she isn’t the nicest, she doesn’t have any hatred for anyone || n/a too reckless || A jade knife with a golden handle || Her parents died in an accidental fire || (thats for you to find)
